Good writing, Jocelyn
Jocelyn Guest's cover story in the December 1 Hook on the fourth-year fifth ["4th and Binge"]is the best thing I have read in your publication.
She presents us with a variety of characters, some developed more and some less, in such a way that we can keep them apart. The decision to follow a group through the whole event provides a narrative spine to hang scenes and reflections on. And she lets the readers draw their own conclusions. Well done.
Don Fry, Writing Coach